I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Eddie, Your ideas are fascinating. I think your reader is going to need a lot of evidence to picture your narrative when you come to writing it.
Here are a few things to think about:
Libya, Japan and Canada are very separate. Why do they need to go there and is it logical to go by car? Hint: Choose one country... and have your characters driving in the car.
Remember the more complex your problems the harder your story will be to understand and write, This is an exciting and big challenge!
Hi Eddie,
ReplyDeleteYour ideas are fascinating. I think your reader is going to need a lot of evidence to picture your narrative when you come to writing it.
Here are a few things to think about:
Libya, Japan and Canada are very separate. Why do they need to go there and is it logical to go by car? Hint: Choose one country... and have your characters driving in the car.
Remember the more complex your problems the harder your story will be to understand and write, This is an exciting and big challenge!