I am a Year 7 student in the Uru Mānuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
I have so many questions. Where did you find this narrative example? Why did you choose it? Does it make sense to you? Do you think you could write better than this? I think you can.
To cut down on all the questions in a readers mind let us know what you are up to in your blog post.
For example:
Hi everyone ( Greeting)
We are learning about narrative writing. ( Intro)
For this task we had to find an example of a narrative and this is what I found on Google. ( Body)
Thanks for checking this out. Can you tell me what you know about narratives? ( Conclusion)
Hi Eddie,
ReplyDeleteI have so many questions. Where did you find this narrative example? Why did you choose it? Does it make sense to you? Do you think you could write better than this? I think you can.
To cut down on all the questions in a readers mind let us know what you are up to in your blog post.
For example:
Hi everyone ( Greeting)
We are learning about narrative writing. ( Intro)
For this task we had to find an example of a narrative and this is what I found on Google. ( Body)
Thanks for checking this out. Can you tell me what you know about narratives? ( Conclusion)
Take care,
Miss D
Hi Miss D, I will update my narrative blogpost after school
DeleteThank you
Eddie