I am a Year 7 student in the Uru MÄnuka Cluster. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first drafts. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Today I am telling you about the six steps of technology. first is identify the problem you have to fond the problem. then Investigate Possible Solutions then you have to Find your solution. then yada yada yada, here is some of my work.
if you liked my blog post then stick around for more if you see any mistakes please comment down below. Bye for now.
Hello, Eddie The first thing I like about your post is the font is really cool. I like that you number them through 1 to 6. There all in the right order. I also like you intro for your post. From your best friend Connor.
I really like that way you put the font like that because i realy like it. Maybe next time you could make the letter after the fullstop a capital. Thank you for your time and Bye.
The only mistakes I can see Eddie,are in box 5 and the title of your work.You have forgotten the t off the word test,and you have written sick instead of six,other than that,great work. Thank you for sharing your work.
Hello, Eddie The first thing I like about your post is the font is really cool. I like that you number them through 1 to 6. There all in the right order. I also like you intro for your post.
ReplyDeleteFrom your best friend Connor.
Hola Eddie,
ReplyDeleteI really like that way you put the font like that because i realy like it. Maybe next time you could make the letter after the fullstop a capital. Thank you for your time and Bye.
Hello Khiel,
DeleteI just talked to you because your right next to me but thanks for the feed back
The only mistakes I can see Eddie,are in box 5 and the title of your work.You have forgotten the t off the word test,and you have written sick instead of six,other than that,great work.
ReplyDeleteThank you for sharing your work.
Hello Mrs Cassidy,
DeleteThe sick steps mistake was for a joke but the test or tes one wasn't. Thank you for your feedback. Bye for now.