today I will be showing you some of my writing work. we have been learning how to write a strong narrative. A strong narrative is descriptive, believable and consistent.
Today we changed old boring sentences to new cool sentences. here is all of my sick sentences
Anna sat down. Anna touched the mirror. The glass moved.
Anna sat down on the cold, uncomfortable, hard, dusty floor
Anna touched the clean, smooth, shiny mirror
The glass rippled like some substance like water
here is the pic that we had to write off of
We have been writing a story with a human called Anna. we have been learning how to write from a pic. here is a part of my unfinished story.
Anna carefully hopped down from the attic and started to run for a window to jump
out of to get away from the burning,
hot, red fire. She found a window to jump out of but the window was on the 2nd floor,
when she jumped from the window
she looked back at her house and it was a blaze of fire and gasoline.
out of to get away from the burning,
hot, red fire. She found a window to jump out of but the window was on the 2nd floor,
when she jumped from the window
she looked back at her house and it was a blaze of fire and gasoline.
Anna ran to the house next to her and she busted into their house...
hope you like my blog post if you see any mistakes please comment down below.
have a great night or morning or after noon.
Bye for now.
have a great night or morning or after noon.
Bye for now.
Hello Eddie.
ReplyDeleteI would love to read your story but it goes across the page.Can you fix it so it goes downwards?.Thank you