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Friday, June 26, 2020

Its Time To Capture!

Hello fellow people,

Yesterday, we were learning about how to show not tell and to capture our audience. The class highlighted the week verbs in their story and used a site called "Thesaurus".
When we used the site we would look up the word, lets say I looked up the word "Looked" it would come up with a list of word that you could use and if you scrolled down a little you would see a box. In the box it say "Put your sentence here!" and you would put your sentence in the box.

Here is a week verb sentence:
Jeff smiled at Bradley.

And here is a strong verb sentence:
Jeff glanced at Bradley and gave a quick smirk.


Do you think you can turn a week sentence into a strong sentence,
if you can then comment it down below.
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